How to Write the Duke University Supplemental Essays

This question is essentially a version of the “Why This College?” question. The prompt can be separated into three discrete parts: a description of your overall sense of the Duke community, why it is a good fit for you, and the specific offerings that appeal to you. While you do not need to answer each element in this order, your essay should address each component.

The first component requires you to articulate your perception of Duke. Perhaps you see it as a place where rigorous academics meet a vibrant, collaborative community, fostering both intellectual and personal growth. Mention specific attributes that stand out to you, such as Duke’s emphasis on interdisciplinary studies, the spirit of innovation, or the strong sense of community and school spirit embodied by events like basketball games at Cameron Indoor Stadium.

As you tackle the second component, consider the question: what about Duke makes it the best fit for you and offers you the chance to do something that you could not do at any other university? Finally, identifying a specific class, lab, resource, or program that is of particular interest to you at Duke provides a tangible example of why the school is a good fit for you. For example, if you’re passionate about environmental science and public policy, highlight Duke’s Nicholas School of the Environment and the Sanford School of Public Policy. Explain how their interdisciplinary approach and opportunities for hands-on research resonate with your desire to tackle real-world environmental challenges. If you’re drawn to Duke’s commitment to service and civic engagement, discuss a program like DukeEngage and how it aligns with your dedication to making a positive impact on society. Dive deeper and do your homework about what you plan to take advantage of once on campus.

Lastly, don’t forget to make this entry fun to read. No matter what you are saying, there is always an engaging way to say it!

Playing soccer for over fifteen years, I am grateful for the countless friendships I have forged. Unfortunately, many inevitably hang up their cleats after high school and adapt to a more sedentary lifestyle, one often accompanied by mental health struggles.

While soccer initially ignited my passion, promoting health and well-being has become a stronger calling. Working with our school doctor, I conducted a survey to yield insights into the prevalence of mental health challenges and sedentary behavior among students. Results highlighted barriers to physical activity, like lack of social connections. These insights helped shape school-wide strategies for encouraging healthier student lives.

Eager to continue learning “the Duke way,” I seek to cultivate my passion for Psychology and Neuroscience at Trinity, where I’ll study the neural influences on motivation and decision-making in neuroscience courses, and improve my understanding of the benefits of physical activity through courses like “Exercise and Mental Health.”

I look forward to continuing my wellness research through Duke’s Bass Connections, working on a project like Creating a Contemplative Community: The Impact of Mindfulness on Student Well-Being.

Much like soccer’s camaraderie, Duke’s community wonderfully emulates the team environment inside and outside of the classroom. From engaging FOCUS group seminars and dinners to contributing to the Blue Devil Wellness Exchange, I know I’ll feel right at home on campus. Although as a cheering fan on the sidelines, there’s no doubt in my mind I’ll still feel very much a part of the Blue Devil family.

This supplement is asking all about your community. We are all a product of our environments, so write about how some of the other key players in your community have had an impact on your life. Which communities do you come from? What impact have they had on your views, beliefs, and experiences? Who and what has shaped you? This is a time to be transparent and honest—paint your readers an authentic, self-aware picture of who you are. You may choose to define community traditionally—your sports team, classmates, religious youth group—or a bit more creatively—a fan group you are a part of, a geographic or linguistic community, an expatriate community—for example.

Remember, trying to impress admission officers will likely come off boastful, and groups like National Honor Society typically do not have a strong, meaningful community associated with them. Be honest, humble and tell readers something that they may not learn about you from the rest of your application.

“Yoga is not about the shape of your body but the shape of your life.”

Every Sunday at 7 p.m., my yoga teacher welcomes our class to the mat with this quote.

Jenn, who is nearly seventy, leans into her down-dogs to my right and Nick, her nine-year-old grandson, frequently lets out soft giggles as he cat-cows to my left. Just ten hours earlier, I left soccer practice exhausted, ruminating on my coach’s instructions to set one physical goal for the coming week, shave our mile-time ten seconds, three long runs when last week he only imposed two…the list is always demanding, meant to push us to meet his exacting standards. There’s a method to his madness, and it has produced results for my team. We finished our last season as reigning state champions, bested only by Florida in the national finals last winter.

Yoga, on the other hand, has brought me the opposite gift: radical acceptance. You bring your present self to the mat day in and day out—linear progress is not the name of the game. Some days, Jenn slips into scorpion pose while Nick slips into a brief nap. Becoming a part-time yogi has taught me to meet my body, my mind, and my community where it is—a lesson that I will bring into this new chapter. As a member of the Duke community, I plan to be present, authentic, and teachable, knowing that accepting myself and others is the foundation for learning and growth.

This question is deliberately open-ended, offering students the chance to showcase their creativity, originality, and imagination. You could write about an instance in which you tackled a problem innovatively, pursued a passion project, or delved into a complex topic that intrigued you. Note that you will convey these qualities not only through what you choose to write about, but also how you choose to write about it. Consider how you might tell the story in a non-linear fashion, weave in humor or an unexpected motif, or reflect the substance through the essay’s style. Let your zaniness, spunk, and authentic voice shine through.

I stared at the math problem on the whiteboard, a tangled mess of derivatives and integrals that twisted and turned like an unsolvable labyrinth. Numbers had always been my friends, but this problem was testing the limits of our relationship. No matter how I approached it, the traditional methods weren’t cutting it.

As I entered the art room later that afternoon, the smell of acrylic paint and the sight of canvases covered in vibrant swirls greeted me. We were learning about fractals, those beautiful, infinitely complex patterns that are self-similar across different scales.
As I sketched out my fractal, it hit me: What if I approached the calculus problem like a fractal, breaking it down into smaller, self-similar parts? The chaotic mess of numbers and symbols on the whiteboard began to take on a new shape in my mind.

That evening, I went to the drawing board—literally. I sketched out the problem, using colors to represent different parts of the equation. By visualizing the problem, I began to see patterns I hadn’t noticed before, untangling the daunting mess of letters and numbers so that I could distinguish the solution in them.

The experience taught me that creativity isn’t confined to the art room or the stage; it’s a universal tool that can turn the mundane into the magical. Whether I’m sketching out solutions or crafting narratives in English class, I approach every challenge with the same creative spirit. Going back to the drawing board is no longer a sign of momentary defeat—it is an invitation to get creative and overcome a challenge with color and pizzazz.

You will need a strong personal anecdote to begin this essay, so take some time to reflect. Start by thinking about areas where you generally align with others. These could be political, ethical, or personal beliefs. Who are the people with whom you find common ground (whether your family members, a figure in your community, or a public figure)? What specific issues or values do you share? Then, consider instances in which you have held differing views from those around you. Who are the individuals you have engaging debates or disagreements with? What topics or values are at the heart of these disagreements? Are they based on differing perspectives, experiences, or ideologies? If you choose to write about someone with whom you disagree, be sure to articulate their perspective with nuance and understanding, showcasing your ability to charitably engage with the viewpoints of others. Finally, reflect on how your beliefs and values have evolved over time. Have you changed your stance on certain issues? Have disagreements led to a deeper understanding or a willingness to consider different perspectives? The end goal when writing this supplement is to demonstrate growth and open-mindedness.

In our family of seven, my mother gave birth to five daughters, and the reaction is always the same: “Wow, your poor dad! Five girls? He must have really wanted a son!” Initially, I responded with genuine curiosity, but as the refrain persisted, irritation set in.

“Why poor dad?” I questioned. Poor mom, I thought. The implication seemed to be that our father lacked a son for backyard catch. Yet, I challenged this notion.

Ironically, these same people assumed my name, “Jesse,” was short for “Jessica.” Swiftly, I corrected them: “No, it’s just Jesse.” Was the assumption due to my gender? I refused to be confined to the “Jessica” mold. I despised the color pink; capris, shorts, and sneakers were my preferred attire for impromptu soccer or volleyball during recess.

Growing up with four sisters, our household radiated empowerment, encouraging us to create, lead, play, and voice our opinions. It was within this supportive environment that I began to understand the misconceptions of society’s predetermined gender roles and constraints that women are placed within.

Simultaneously, I recognized my own inconsistency; my resistance to typical female roles clashed with my quick dismissal of “Jessica” and my pink projection of her, demonstrating my own predisposition for stereotyping.

As I continue my journey to dismantle these stereotypes, I strive to carry this empowerment forward. By fostering an environment that encourages everyone to defy rigid roles, acknowledge their own prejudices, and embrace their true selves, I hope to contribute to a more inclusive and diverse society.

Duke is very proud of its inclusive culture, and the university strives to foster a sense of belonging in students of all orientations. If your sexual orientation or gender expression has a significant bearing on your identity as a member of a community, this optional prompt is an excellent opportunity to share about it with admissions officers. This could involve personal experiences, community involvement, or ways you’ve navigated your identity in different settings.

“We should only invite queer students to queer prom.”

The argument, lauded by many members of Gay-Straight Alliance, diametrically opposed the reason I had proposed we host the event in the first place. Being a member of the queer community can be a siloed experience, and I wanted to invite allies to better understand the struggles that queer students face, while also sharing in the joy and diversity of what it means to be a queer student.

Even in the clashes of ideas, the process of organizing the Queer Prom revealed the beauty in sharing and celebrating our differences, and our diverse backgrounds enriched the event. Through these discussions, we discovered that the diversity of perspectives wasn’t just beneficial—it was transformative; that realization helped others to recognize the value in having allies present.

Straight student allies shared stories about how their understanding of queer culture had evolved, while queer students, including myself, felt a renewed sense of validation and community. To me, being queer is about embracing our difference as a strength, not a weakness—and that night encapsulated the most beautiful aspects of that identity.

As you answer this prompt, begin by identifying the aspects of yourself that make you unique. These could be personal qualities, experiences, cultural background, or anything that sets you apart from others. Consider qualities and traits you have not already mentioned in other sections of your application or Duke essays. How have these unique aspects influenced your values, beliefs, and outlook on life? Have they led to specific experiences or challenges that have shaped your character? Make sure to focus on only one trait or characteristic, rather than providing a list of your distinguishing qualities. Then, use a compelling personal anecdote to highlight how your experience of being different has influenced you. Did you have a positive experience? What were your challenges? Did you build resiliency or empathy? Reflect on this learning experience and what embracing differences means to you. Finally, describe how your individuality can contribute to Duke’s community and enrich its culture.

“Excuse me, Mrs. Michaelson—I have an accommodation for extra time.”

I said the words as quietly as possible, looking around to ensure that none of my classmates were in earshot. For years, I felt ashamed of my dyslexia. My sisters are all neurotypical learners—they read voraciously and have always felt at home in the classroom. Their effortless understanding of new material often made me feel defective and unintelligent—I worried that the admission that I needed extra time or an audiobook option would make my peers think less of me.

However, that day in Mrs. Michaelson’s class during the first week of junior year, one lingering student heard my whispered acknowledgement. When I stepped into the hall, a bubbly classmate was waiting to greet me, letting me know that there was a group of students who had formed a community around their own neurodivergent learning styles and inviting me to join. Though I was hesitant at first, I eventually joined their lunch meeting and began participating in group chats and study sessions in which we would share resources and help each other grasp the material. Their zeal for learning and pride in their own unique ways of intaking information expelled the shame I had for my dyslexia. Now, I view my learning differences as an asset, a unique part of who I am, rather than an impairment.